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    dots Submission Name: An impeccable worlddots

    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 265/107/53
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAn impeccable worlddots

    An impeccable world

    Imperfect me
    Imperfect you
    in an imperfect world.

    Imperfections cause commotion.
    Imperfections cause disharmony.
    Imperfections create a turbulent and chaotic mind.
    Imperfections create a turbulent and chaotic world.

    The world is moving towards imperfections.
    The world is moving towards self-destruction.

    Attaining perfection is moving towards divinity.
    Attaining perfection is imbibing divine qualities.
    Attaining perfection is turning into a virtuous being and merging into divine.
    Attaining perfection is turning a human into divine and this imperfect world into an impeccable world.

    Submitted on 2016-05-31 01:45:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      But what is divinity? A world cannot move towards it without knowing what that is.
    You say this, but I say the world is learning.
    | Posted on 2016-06-03 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      I read this and it really makes me want to see a world like this eventually. But even if we managed to create such a perfect world. I feel like people like myself would only exist to destroy it or otherwise cause balance of imperfection. Ive still yet to find a harmony in myself to attain a state of being closer to perfection. But when i do ill let you know haha. Great write ramneet
    | Posted on 2016-05-31 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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