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Author:	Ramneet
ASL Info:	33/F/Boston
Elite Ratio:	2.95 - 270/107/55
Words:	89

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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An impeccable world dots

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An impeccable world

Imperfect me
Imperfect you
in an imperfect world.

Imperfections cause commotion.
Imperfections cause disharmony.
Imperfections create a turbulent and chaotic mind.
Imperfections create a turbulent and chaotic world.

The world is moving towards imperfections.
The world is moving towards self-destruction.

Attaining perfection is moving towards divinity.
Attaining perfection is imbibing divine qualities.
Attaining perfection is turning into a virtuous being and merging into divine.
Attaining perfection is turning a human into divine and this imperfect world into an impeccable world.

Submitted on 2016-05-31 01:45:59 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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But what is divinity? A world cannot move towards it without knowing what that is.
You say this, but I say the world is learning.
| Posted on 2016-06-03 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
I read this and it really makes me want to see a world like this eventually. But even if we managed to create such a perfect world. I feel like people like myself would only exist to destroy it or otherwise cause balance of imperfection. Ive still yet to find a harmony in myself to attain a state of being closer to perfection. But when i do ill let you know haha. Great write ramneet
| Posted on 2016-05-31 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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