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    dots Submission Name: Fridaydots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFridaydots
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    I love her today.
    Cause it's Friday.
    She's going to look so good.
    Exactly how she should.
    And she will be my trophy.
    Make them want to know me.

    And not on Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Saturday.
    Or Sunday.
    Only Friday gets my best because she's earned it.
    I'd say.
    And I patiently have to wait 6 days just to see her.
    Feel her.
    My mind and body ache from pain because i need her.
    Seizure.

    I miss her tonight.
    Cause it's midnight.
    She looked so good last time,
    And the boys all knew she's mine.
    The way i wore her on my arm,
    Blatantly, like i output charm.
    And at 12 i let her go.
    She already knows.
    Saturday is here.
    I just bought her another beer.
    And as she takes my side.
    Friday, she waves goodbye.




    Submitted on 2016-05-31 14:04:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am a big fan of Friday too however Saturday is even better, in my opinion, but that is only because I don't have to work on Saturday and sleeping late is always a plus! 😊
    | Posted on 2016-07-08 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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