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    dots Submission Name: As We Have Itdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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       Desire is where lapses of time merge.


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    dotsAs We Have Itdots
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    A test in the act of examining itself, the self may think
    Whereas I do not -
    Not of those many days and those many nights we never spent

    I wished we had. I wish we hadn't.

    To create and to make love with passion;
    The re-kindling of a spark thirsting to be lit aflame
    Synonymous with the conception of my fruitfulness, my justice and mine alone
    I wonder, to prosper, must I have it?

    Oh, wondrous planet
    You once wished we had, but you wish we hadn't.

    My lover is the fruit I chose to pick from the tree
    And dropped
    For the ants my lover bleeds
    All because of me.

    Do I pepper my wits with your ocean spray?
    I know once I wished that I had, but I wish now that I hadn't.

    I watch my lover's eyes pulse with tunnel vision
    And their veins strain, flush
    Honed edges of their visual perception
    That I see beaming, reaching forth but from my left...
    Only my right reaches so far as to
    14 billion light years away.
    Do I chase the past, do I chase you now or do I stay?

    I think you still wish that I had and I wish greatly that I hadn't.




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