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    dots Submission Name: Neosporindots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 534
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Bandages are no friend to me.


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    dotsNeosporindots
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    And the
    people they
    wept for the lack
    of warmth.


    Their hearts grew cold they were mourned.



    Do not lament
    these fellow souls
    for they need your love
    need to grow.


    Planting seeds is all we can do.



    The weed within it over grew.



    Cut it at the root.





    What is the root of all evil?



    Money
    Hate
    Jealously
    indecent
    Calamity
    Broken
    Morality
    Soulless
    Actions
    Ego
    Selfishness
    Greed
    Anger



    All we are
    Is what we are
    All we know is who we know.
    All we get is what we give.
    All we need is to plant seeds.


    Look at this all these opinions.

    The me mentality.
    Society.



    Resi- dude
    Pipe drawn
    Inhalations.


    Exhaled slowly.




    Crispy
    throat
    Too dry
    To swallow.

    Loud gulp.




    Some are just more seasoned.


    Love with all you are and the rest is dead.



    Let that water flow under the bridge.







    Be that light from within
    Express your heart
    it's not a sin.





    Be the love
    See the light
    Just be kind.


    Think in colors
    not just white
    Connect your passions
    with the light.


    Let the dark
    be for rest
    And all those
    naughty things
    Erect.



    Get the sleep you've
    Always wanted
    Relax and breath
    In deeply.


    Exhale
    all your worries
    Release it kindly.

    Manifest your reality.




    (Neosporin! Wtf)
















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