Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Neosporindots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 534
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2541



    Description:
       Bandages are no friend to me.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNeosporindots
    -------------------------------------------


    And the
    people they
    wept for the lack
    of warmth.


    Their hearts grew cold they were mourned.



    Do not lament
    these fellow souls
    for they need your love
    need to grow.


    Planting seeds is all we can do.



    The weed within it over grew.



    Cut it at the root.





    What is the root of all evil?



    Money
    Hate
    Jealously
    indecent
    Calamity
    Broken
    Morality
    Soulless
    Actions
    Ego
    Selfishness
    Greed
    Anger



    All we are
    Is what we are
    All we know is who we know.
    All we get is what we give.
    All we need is to plant seeds.


    Look at this all these opinions.

    The me mentality.
    Society.



    Resi- dude
    Pipe drawn
    Inhalations.


    Exhaled slowly.




    Crispy
    throat
    Too dry
    To swallow.

    Loud gulp.




    Some are just more seasoned.


    Love with all you are and the rest is dead.



    Let that water flow under the bridge.







    Be that light from within
    Express your heart
    it's not a sin.





    Be the love
    See the light
    Just be kind.


    Think in colors
    not just white
    Connect your passions
    with the light.


    Let the dark
    be for rest
    And all those
    naughty things
    Erect.



    Get the sleep you've
    Always wanted
    Relax and breath
    In deeply.


    Exhale
    all your worries
    Release it kindly.

    Manifest your reality.




    (Neosporin! Wtf)
















    Submitted on 2016-06-04 02:25:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201316

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    The Promise written by annie0888
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Incubus written by monad
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry