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    dots Submission Name: Losing1dots
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    Author: geekyslacker
    ASL Info:    28/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64/41/14
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 472
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 383



    Description:
       I wrote this 6 years ago. All for nothing.


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    dotsLosing1dots
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    I broke something.
    -Nothing new-
    Something precious and fragile.
    -Only afterwards do you think so-
    I will mend it.
    -You can only do so much.-
    I will mend it.
    -Its not your decision to make.-
    I will make every attempt.
    -It may all go to waste.-
    Every effort must be made.
    -Results may vary-

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      I can still bye White-Out.
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