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Author: geekyslacker
ASL Info:    28/f/tx
Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64 /41 /14
Words: 56
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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I wrote this 6 years ago. All for nothing.


I broke something.
-Nothing new-
Something precious and fragile.
-Only afterwards do you think so-
I will mend it.
-You can only do so much.-
I will mend it.
-Its not your decision to make.-
I will make every attempt.
-It may all go to waste.-
Every effort must be made.
-Results may vary-


Submitted on 2016-06-08 20:27:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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