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Sullen (Pt. 4)

Author: geekyslacker
ASL Info:    28/f/tx
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My muse left this world only 20 months after I wrote this.

Sullen (Pt. 4)

Are you sitting sullen, as I realize I can't do without you?
Do you feel annoyed, as I envision you?
As you move, as you breath, as you blink.
Do you watch from the inside, as I splinter without you?
Do you endure my spirit, as I succumb to delirium?
Declare your desires and fulfill your ambitions.
I have judged the ins and outs.
I have weighed the pros and cons.
I will fight. I will believe. I will wait.
I sit here sullen as I can’t think clearly anymore.

Submitted on 2016-06-08 20:30:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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