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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
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    Being that of
    which you see
    The love that
    lies beneath.
    You embarrass me
    by saying
    What you ought
    not say.

    Retreat from a huge
    bite of
    Bbq pork

    Peeling away
    The bun...

    'When's the last time
    you spooned your pork?'

    I hate me.


    Thank you for your
    love's generosity.

    Submitted on 2016-06-10 18:20:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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