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    dots Submission Name: We Are A Skitdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 804
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    Bytes: 247



    Description:
       Short re-cap of the other night.


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    dotsWe Are A Skitdots
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    We draw out figures from clouds of the evening sky

    We make laughter of odd and even momentous strife

    We share in our sweet mouths bitter strands of fresh rye

    O', Abandon
    You are so handsome.




    Submitted on 2016-06-13 05:36:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If you don't laugh, you'll cry.

    We make laughter of odd and even momentous strife.

    This really can be taken as either laugh or cry, or laugh in ignorance. I myself am feeling tonight that if I don't laugh, I'll cry. So I will keep your words as this, though Im sure you probably meant it as something flirty seeing as you are embracing abandonment. Throwing caution to the wind.

    I like how this could be perceived as something sad or something reckless.
    | Posted on 2016-06-24 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]


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