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    dots Submission Name: Sanatarium - Metallicadots
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    Author: Debauchery
    ASL Info:    60/NA/Mars
    Elite Ratio:    1.48 - 2/5/6
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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       Be still my dark heart.


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    dotsSanatarium - Metallicadots
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    Welcome to where time stands still
    No one leaves and no one will
    Moon is full, never seems to change
    Just labeled mentally deranged

    Dream the same thing every night
    I see our freedom in my sight
    No locked doors, no windows barred
    No things to make my brain seem scarred

    Sleep my friend and you will see
    The dream is my reality
    They keep me locked up in this cage
    Can't they see it's why my brain says rage

    Sanitarium, leave me be
    Sanitarium, just leave me alone

    Build my fear of what's out there
    Can I breathe the open air
    Whisper things into my brain
    Assuring me that I'm insane

    They think our heads are in their hands
    But violent use brings violent plans
    Keep him tied, it makes him well
    He's getting better, can't you tell?

    No more can they keep us in
    Listen, damn it, we will win
    They see it right, they see it well
    But they think this saves us from our hell

    Sanitarium, leave me be
    Sanitarium, just leave me alone
    Sanitarium, just leave me alone

    Fear of living on, natives getting restless now
    Mutiny in the air, got some death to do
    Mirror stares back hard, kill, it's such a friendly word
    Seems the only way for reaching out again






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