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    dots Submission Name: Minos and Mandots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsMinos and Mandots

    Sterilized within this---the echo chamber,
    to once again be born;
    to once again be punished for sin.
    Manifest destiny of man,
    in conquest of ink, will and wit;
    in conquest of gold, flesh and faith.
    Humanity captivated blindly,
    with baubles dangled by the misers;
    with baubles stolen by men far wiser.

    Judgment within this---the wayward path,
    to ruination from Armageddon;
    to ruination from Ragnarok.
    Even if man speaks in tongues,
    he can never escape Alamatu qiyami's-sa'ah;
    he can never escape the Sermon of the Seven Suns.
    Humanity lead silently,
    into the pits of prostration;
    into the pits of condemnation.

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