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    dots Submission Name: Perceptiondots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Righteousness can lay in a clear impurity
    The bold thorn in the darkness of the dawn

    Lifts a shadow off a dream

    Eloquently
    like a breeze
    In the background
    of a silent moment

    No mystery to reflect
    No fundamentals broken

    Ordinary to everything that isn't human







    Submitted on 2016-06-22 17:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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