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    dots Submission Name: Mi amor dots
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    Author: MmR
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    dotsMi amor dots
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    How could I forget you
    My only love
    Mi amor?
    You
    Who has taught me
    That love and pain are all the same.

    As funny as love can be
    ( I know that you don't really love me)

    I give you my pain
    On a platter for kings
    Mi Rey
    As you pretend to listen
    To the songs I sing....

    For I Can't Help Falling In Love With You.

    And when my love
    Mi amor
    Is too real for you to endure
    You push me into night
    To admire my lovely moon
    Who softly croons

    For I Can't Help Falling In Love With You.

    But even then my love
    Mi amor
    I know that no one
    No One
    Can fall in love with me.





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      But that doesn't mean no one can love you.
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