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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 939
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    Description:
       So this is what it feels like everytime I hear hank williams music or if I just need to hear it.

    My dad use to drunkenly son when all his friends left from their parties and poker games. The alcohol and background music would take over and he would mourn the death of my papa. Who, according to my dad was betrayed by his mom and first born over business and money. In his hurt and anguish my dad thought he took his own life driving his skitter backwards off a mountain and breaking his neck. It was an act of spite and sorrow according to my dad because his wife collected a handsome life insurance check from his policy.


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    Background Music

    Hearing the memory of when my daddy used to cry
    just a deck of cards to catch his tears
    whispering things he couldn't say
    his loss which was not so clear
    as the pain he'd have to take

    it is just as familiar to me as the blood through my veins
    a melody of dying
    and crying
    and pain

    A Hank Williams song about the by and by
    Precious Promises of tomorrow
    old guitars do tell their Tales and make my heart at home with sorrow




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      Every rose has its thorn..
    I guess,.. this really gets me to thinking, remembering..
    It's a good write..makes one reflect
    | Posted on 2016-06-27 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]


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