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    dots Submission Name: Rinse & Repeatdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.49 - 145/114/65
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       All things have their time. Everything has a beginning and an end. Yet sometimes, it doesn't seem or even appear that way. A little nod to The Eagles...


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    dotsRinse & Repeatdots
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    Standing at the edge
    Thinking
    Projecting
    The wind...
    ...is that the wind?

    A portrait
    of rolling waves
    and mist

    The blackness
    Do you see it?
    It follows me
    while I stand here
    In back of the sun

    Arms beside
    then outstretched
    Looking up
    with eyes closed
    You can fly

    The view...
    No
    THE WIND
    Rushing
    Pushing
    I see
    ...the blue...
    Perfect and clear
    Swells of water
    come closer

    I am there
    No longer waiting
    No longer wondering
    I feel!

    What is that?
    so blurred...
    Is it real?
    ...and yet familiar
    Something
    Something
    It can't be!

    I scream
    so that ends
    and this begins
    "Relax", said the night man
    "Rinse & Repeat"

    2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan




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