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Rinse & Repeat

Author: krs3332003
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All things have their time. Everything has a beginning and an end. Yet sometimes, it doesn't seem or even appear that way. A little nod to The Eagles...

Rinse & Repeat

Standing at the edge
The wind... that the wind?

A portrait
of rolling waves
and mist

The blackness
Do you see it?
It follows me
while I stand here
In back of the sun

Arms beside
then outstretched
Looking up
with eyes closed
You can fly

The view...
I see
...the blue...
Perfect and clear
Swells of water
come closer

I am there
No longer waiting
No longer wondering
I feel!

What is that?
so blurred...
Is it real?
...and yet familiar
It can't be!

I scream
so that ends
and this begins
"Relax", said the night man
"Rinse & Repeat"

2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan

Submitted on 2016-06-25 15:57:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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