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    dots Submission Name: Arya Thricedots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsArya Thricedots
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    A girl makes
    Promises




    she
    can
    not
    hold






    She folds
    and bends
    and breaks
    the mold







    Yielding
    signs of warnings
    Fighting blindly.




    Submitted on 2016-06-28 16:42:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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