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    dots Submission Name: The Molecule Poetsdots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Molecule Poetsdots
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    Connected to the continental light
    International spatial triangular-bright
    Quadrilateral emeralds floating insight

    Time is leaking elements
    Where natives weave life into colorful fragments

    Traveling the stars
    Following the cosmic footprints
    Toward the new Mars

    The universe attached to the fourth eye
    Our hearts pulsing with the energy
    Making earth cry

    We trace the music in our veins
    Listen
    Listen
    To the tune of our pain

    Children of the sun
    Moon bending in dance
    We our one

    Heaven hidden in our ink




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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey! I never knew I had a shadow! I guess I'm just a molecule subjected to the laws of reflection and refraction. On a more serious note: I like the rhythm of the imagery I see here, I'm off to view your other work too...
    | Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Well if that ain't the mule kit blues on the Martian war lord.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-06-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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