The Molecule Poets

Author: ShadowParadox Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 25 /68 /35 Words: 88

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The Molecule Poets

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Connected to the continental light International spatial triangular-bright Quadrilateral emeralds floating insight Time is leaking elements Where natives weave life into colorful fragments Traveling the stars Following the cosmic footprints Toward the new Mars The universe attached to the fourth eye Our hearts pulsing with the energy Making earth cry We trace the music in our veins Listen Listen To the tune of our pain Children of the sun Moon bending in dance We our one Heaven hidden in our ink

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Hey! I never knew I had a shadow! I guess I'm just a molecule subjected to the laws of reflection and refraction. On a more serious note: I like the rhythm of the imagery I see here, I'm off to view your other work too...

| Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

Well if that ain't the mule kit blues on the Martian war lord. Bruce

| Posted on 2016-06-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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