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Submission Name:
The Molecule Poets
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Author:
ShadowParadox
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The Molecule Poets
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Connected to the continental light
International spatial triangular-bright
Quadrilateral emeralds floating insight
Time is leaking elements
Where natives weave life into colorful fragments
Traveling the stars
Following the cosmic footprints
Toward the new Mars
The universe attached to the fourth eye
Our hearts pulsing with the energy
Making earth cry
We trace the music in our veins
Listen
Listen
To the tune of our pain
Children of the sun
Moon bending in dance
We our one
Heaven hidden in our ink
Submitted on 2016-06-29 00:55:22
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Hey! I never knew I had a shadow! I guess I'm just a molecule subjected to the laws of reflection and refraction. On a more serious note: I like the rhythm of the imagery I see here, I'm off to view your other work too...
| Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by
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Well if that ain't the mule kit blues on the Martian war lord.
Bruce
| Posted on 2016-06-29 00:00:00 | by
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