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The Molecule Poets

Author: ShadowParadox
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The Molecule Poets

Connected to the continental light
International spatial triangular-bright
Quadrilateral emeralds floating insight

Time is leaking elements
Where natives weave life into colorful fragments

Traveling the stars
Following the cosmic footprints
Toward the new Mars

The universe attached to the fourth eye
Our hearts pulsing with the energy
Making earth cry

We trace the music in our veins
To the tune of our pain

Children of the sun
Moon bending in dance
We our one

Heaven hidden in our ink

Submitted on 2016-06-29 00:55:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey! I never knew I had a shadow! I guess I'm just a molecule subjected to the laws of reflection and refraction. On a more serious note: I like the rhythm of the imagery I see here, I'm off to view your other work too...
| Posted on 2016-10-19 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  Well if that ain't the mule kit blues on the Martian war lord.

| Posted on 2016-06-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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