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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 53/169/180
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    So rise up and bring your hearts with you.




    This time around
    we shall overcome .




    Overcome
    the meekness
    The weakness



    We are pithy.


    We should be
    The light in our
    Hearts.

    Stars in our eyes
    And a galaxy
    Well aware of us.



    In a galaxy
    Needing
    Both
    Darkness
    And light
    Matter
    And anti matter.

    Positive
    negative


    Opposites
    Attract.

    Magnetic zeros.
    Plausible?


    Can two Zero's be driven together
    By sheer force alone?

    Well, I suppose it's how they are charged.









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