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    dots Submission Name: River Princessdots

    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 144/114/64
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Yes, we have all known someone like this from our past. Let's hope that they stay in the past...

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    dotsRiver Princessdots

    To behold her beauty
    would enslave your soul
    Fair upon fairest
    from love she has stole

    Ageless as time
    forever in white
    Yet black as a raven
    midair in flight

    Flowing through forests
    so shimmering green
    A river of sadness
    from tears left unseen

    Suitors that see
    soon become lost
    With only a glance
    their death is the cost

    Eyes cast in blue
    with darkness at heart
    Nothing from nothing
    they’re torn apart

    Man’s full deceit
    has given her wrath
    Lies and untruth
    in exile the path

    Dare to chance
    a moment to miss
    Only the faithful
    will try to resist

    Life drained away
    they turn to dust
    She smiles to release
    on faith of no trust

    An endless charade
    of blood and desire
    Empty yet full
    and into the fire

    Tempt her no more
    and let her remain
    Frigid and burning
    to end her domain

    2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan

    Submitted on 2016-07-03 11:39:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan" is that you too?
    | Posted on 2016-07-15 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Great poem, but not you?
    | Posted on 2016-07-14 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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