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Submission Name:
River Princess
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Author:
krs3332003
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162
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Yes, we have all known someone like this from our past. Let's hope that they stay in the past...
River Princess
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To behold her beauty
would enslave your soul
Fair upon fairest
from love she has stole
Ageless as time
forever in white
Yet black as a raven
midair in flight
Flowing through forests
so shimmering green
A river of sadness
from tears left unseen
Suitors that see
soon become lost
With only a glance
their death is the cost
Eyes cast in blue
with darkness at heart
Nothing from nothing
they’re torn apart
Man’s full deceit
has given her wrath
Lies and untruth
in exile the path
Dare to chance
a moment to miss
Only the faithful
will try to resist
Life drained away
they turn to dust
She smiles to release
on faith of no trust
An endless charade
of blood and desire
Empty yet full
and into the fire
Tempt her no more
and let her remain
Frigid and burning
to end her domain
2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan
Submitted on 2016-07-03 11:39:48
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"2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan" is that you too?
| Posted on 2016-07-15 00:00:00 | by
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Great poem, but not you?
| Posted on 2016-07-14 00:00:00 | by
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