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    dots Submission Name: At what angle?dots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsAt what angle?dots
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    Freely feeling
    Being mentally
    Inclined









    And was it like a 90 degree angle?


    No.



    More like 40.





    Well, that is not straight up.





    Disappointments






    will



















    arise.










    Submitted on 2016-07-05 00:56:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Straight up forever ontology on high. Lightning bow's hat pick, from the nadir to the zenith, 360 degrees of conquest. We're obtusely overt naturally to soldier sentinel the warrior. One can only hope the heights will supersede the depths.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-07-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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