[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: At what angle?dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 536
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 666


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAt what angle?dots

    Freely feeling
    Being mentally

    And was it like a 90 degree angle?


    More like 40.

    Well, that is not straight up.




    Submitted on 2016-07-05 00:56:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Straight up forever ontology on high. Lightning bow's hat pick, from the nadir to the zenith, 360 degrees of conquest. We're obtusely overt naturally to soldier sentinel the warrior. One can only hope the heights will supersede the depths.

    | Posted on 2016-07-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Fasade written by jackz
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    AI written by poetotoe
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Because of You written by poetotoe
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Push written by JanePlane
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Linger written by saartha
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]