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    dots Submission Name: Poetry dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPoetry dots

    A simple
    Fills my heart
    and makes me

    When I think
    of you
    I write
    The most

    a tag,
    In my dress
    it read:

    I live that brand.

    It made me stop and


    Appreciate the things
    that allow me to stop
    And savor the moment.

    Relish in the tomatoes and
    Cut the pickle, l have lived again
    Within this sentinel.

    Submitted on 2016-07-09 02:12:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Life has an interesting way of prompting us to create with words. Something heard, something seen, or even a particular scent can send us into a writing frenzy. To write what our senses are trying to show us is sometimes maddening...but it, for me, is always satisfying.

    The tag in your dress made you appreciate other things and write them down. It's times like that which make you an artist, and better for it.

    Thank you for sharing...your poem mused me to slow down a bit, and to take it all in.

    Take care,

    | Posted on 2016-07-09 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]

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