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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    A simple
    display
    of
    thoughtfulness
    Fills my heart
    and makes me
    smile
    Endless.


    When I think
    of you
    I write
    The most
    beautiful
    Poems.

    Today,
    a tag,
    In my dress
    it read:
    "Poetry"


    I live that brand.

    It made me stop and

    Appreciate.






    Appreciate the things
    that allow me to stop
    And savor the moment.



    Relish in the tomatoes and
    Cut the pickle, l have lived again
    Within this sentinel.













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    ||| Comments |||
      Life has an interesting way of prompting us to create with words. Something heard, something seen, or even a particular scent can send us into a writing frenzy. To write what our senses are trying to show us is sometimes maddening...but it, for me, is always satisfying.

    The tag in your dress made you appreciate other things and write them down. It's times like that which make you an artist, and better for it.

    Thank you for sharing...your poem mused me to slow down a bit, and to take it all in.

    Take care,

    K
    | Posted on 2016-07-09 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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