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    dots Submission Name: You Seuss Medots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsYou Seuss Medots
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    I couldn't
    shouldn't
    wouldn't
    get up
    not for a peep
    not from my sleep
    I thought
    the day would keep

    no longer alone
    not for some bone
    or a treat I'm thrown
    happy in my dreams of you
    you and me
    tucked away in our home

    smothering you with kisses
    my beautiful misses
    I thought of you
    throughout my slumber
    I did
    I did
    and awoke
    I can prove it
    with this morning lumber




    Submitted on 2016-07-10 12:45:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      There is nothing like the stories of Dr. Seuss. Over the years, I have managed to collect a book or two, or three of those wonderful tales.

    I must admit, You Seuss Me is quite good. It has the same jump and appeal of a classical Seuss rhyme. The bit at the end brings new meaning to "morning wood:) Did you share this with the object of your affection...if not, I think you should, you should.

    Thanks for sharing,

    K
    | Posted on 2016-07-10 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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