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    dots Submission Name: Given Takedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 642
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 376



    Description:
       you've given to me...
    you have...
    all that I am
    all that I'll be
    All that I need
    is you


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    dotsGiven Takedots
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    Take
    Take what you need
    Take it from me
    Take it for free

    Given
    Given to seed
    Given to feed
    All of your needs

    We
    Needed to be
    Given and free
    To each
    And every need

    Given so free
    Take
    Take all that you need
    It’s everything
    Me




    Submitted on 2016-07-10 14:14:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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