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    dots Submission Name: Poetotoe Headdots

    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
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    dotsPoetotoe Headdots

    An Oz combination
    Without courage or heart
    Not much of a brain
    And that's only the start

    Hiding yourself
    Not admitting you're lame
    Talentless comments
    Only meant to inflame

    Try to write something
    Even if cute
    Let's critique your admission
    I'm sure worthy of rebuke

    Inane and childish
    Such venomous words
    Search retorts
    From the masses and hoards

    You have no understanding
    No talent,
    Or respect
    Nothing you think, is worth a red cent

    Submitted on 2016-07-12 18:49:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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