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RIP David 10/7/76 - 6/10/16
I lay here wide eyed and weary
Asking myself will these thunderous screams ever simmer down?
As if I am drowning from it all
How can this be?
So many people surround me
I am drowning in the fears
Suffocated by the truths
Barricaded myself into this oblivion
Running only on autopilot
My days seem to come and go
This heavy heart continues to carry me
Afraid to propose the question, yet I do,
How long can this fractured heart of mine go on like this?
Lost within this oblivion
Nothing remains but that of memories
Hollowness from within
Where these cries only seem to echo…
Submitted on 2016-07-14 12:01:30
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Praying for you loss and hoping that you find comfort in your grief. This piece is a great testimony to that pain and I am sorry that it is something you are going through.
Thank you for sharing.
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