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    dots Submission Name: The River of Janusdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe River of Janusdots
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    Implicitly we tumbled as grains of sand,
    slipping tirelessly through the river’s hand,
    intervals of stasis to beachhead for fellow man,
    hope---to reach a timeless land.

    Nostalgically we departed as notes from the ship’s bell,
    echoing memories on a river through Hell.
    Eight for mourning, a call to Heaven for a soul or sale,
    wedding day love---to be remembered as well.

    To look to the future,
    paint of a new hue---a face bleak,
    afraid of what has been.

    To look at the past,
    sketch a familiar way---a face defined,
    scarred from what once was.

    Boundaries warped by chaos and fervor,
    as the water storms branching,
    creating new dimensions; creating a new river.
    Strife beneath those punishing waves,
    polished the same stones,
    used to punish injustice;
    used to build home.

    To you, the profound prologue,
    tell us what we once were;
    tell us from where we come-

    To you, the envious epilogue,
    tell us where we died;
    tell us when the river dries.




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