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    dots Submission Name: Atalayadots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 434
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsAtalayadots
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    Sing me this days lullaby
    tomorrow
    as I say goodbye
    So that way I
    shall never want
    To forget
    The song that
    Stole my heart.

    Sing me tomorrow
    Today's
    Lullaby
    That way we
    Will never defy
    Our hearts
    Or deny
    our eyes
    Of true love.

    Sing me tomorrow
    This Lullaby
    The words and rhyme
    They seem to grind
    Inside my head it stays
    Sublime.

    Sing me today
    About tomorrow's
    Lullaby
    The melody sways
    The mood
    Attuned.

    Giving life a
    Second wind
    Allowing my soul
    To depend on
    The light at the
    end of the tunnel
    Accompanied by a
    Lullaby.

    So when I'm old
    And full of thoughts
    I may be filled
    With a loving heart.


    Read me these lullaby's
    Should I decide to
    Loose my mind.

    Remind me of the good
    Ole days when life was easy
    And full of praise.

    Remind me when I loose my mind
    That our love was cherished
    And full of stars.

    Sit with me and hold my hand
    Then lay with me
    and come to bed
    Hold me close and
    pull me in.

    I will put my ear on your chest
    And listen to your earnest unrest.
    Heart beating out your Chest.

    I will rest my head
    Knowing that your
    Heart beats
    providing
    The rhythm
    creating peace.

    I will sleep.
    Then you will
    Sleep too.

    We will awake
    And thank
    The day
    For
    Yesterday's
    Lullaby's gave way
    To flooding love's
    Embrace.

    Sing me tomorrow
    Today's lullaby
    So I may
    Always want
    Your sigh
    Of relief
    From The grief
    Of ever changing
    More.

    Sing me this lullaby
    When I'm old and grey
    And over weight full of
    Opinions and crabby
    At best.

    (Lol. I won't be crabby. )

    I'll be my best
    Because life will swaddle me inside
    Your arms and calm my soul with
    Your undying Love.


    We will be artists
    together
    You will write
    And I will paint
    You will express
    While I reject
    And you will see
    The beauty in everything.




    I want to be like the
    Huntington's.



    Philanthropists

    Beautifully giving
    full Of grace
    donating a life
    To the rest.

    Beautiful people
    Leaving legacies.












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