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    dots Submission Name: Lures and Witch Hunts dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    It was quarter ‘till nine,
    eyes of sunlight began to blink.
    A drowsy climb into some divine,
    intoxicated on sky wine,
    elderly clouds wrapped themselves in pink.

    There I stood---alone to implore,
    countless memories,
    I once again yearn to explore.
    A snap of my wrist to an aimless place,
    sinking lead and lure into the murky waste.

    Trees with token effigies,
    of a failed ambition;
    of a failed calculation.
    Reminders of where the wicked bass swim,
    and the curse of the hunt, driving all men to win.

    There I thought---of my father,
    the mighty strength of his smile;
    the masterful speed of his guile.
    A twitch of the braided line and I pull tighter,
    glad in the moment he remains for the while.

    Churning maelstrom of hydrilla,
    gave glimpses of its sickly verdant scale;
    carmine flare of blood and gill.
    A watery nature battled an earthy Hell,
    pulling harder to save the soul I try to steal.

    There I fought---for lost dignity,
    of the many bent hooks;
    of the many bewitched lures.
    Forgotten books---pages from life I took,
    hoping redemption for a plagiarized infinity.

    Escaping with the stinging creatures of the night,
    mosquitoes, chiggers, leeches and ticks,
    awaken in a signal of stings and bites.
    Damned to fall for Nature’s trick,
    Tomorrow another hunt; tomorrow another fight.




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