Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Lures and Witch Hunts dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 75/182/208
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 549
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1565



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLures and Witch Hunts dots
    -------------------------------------------


    It was quarter ‘till nine,
    eyes of sunlight began to blink.
    A drowsy climb into some divine,
    intoxicated on sky wine,
    elderly clouds wrapped themselves in pink.

    There I stood---alone to implore,
    countless memories,
    I once again yearn to explore.
    A snap of my wrist to an aimless place,
    sinking lead and lure into the murky waste.

    Trees with token effigies,
    of a failed ambition;
    of a failed calculation.
    Reminders of where the wicked bass swim,
    and the curse of the hunt, driving all men to win.

    There I thought---of my father,
    the mighty strength of his smile;
    the masterful speed of his guile.
    A twitch of the braided line and I pull tighter,
    glad in the moment he remains for the while.

    Churning maelstrom of hydrilla,
    gave glimpses of its sickly verdant scale;
    carmine flare of blood and gill.
    A watery nature battled an earthy Hell,
    pulling harder to save the soul I try to steal.

    There I fought---for lost dignity,
    of the many bent hooks;
    of the many bewitched lures.
    Forgotten books---pages from life I took,
    hoping redemption for a plagiarized infinity.

    Escaping with the stinging creatures of the night,
    mosquitoes, chiggers, leeches and ticks,
    awaken in a signal of stings and bites.
    Damned to fall for Nature’s trick,
    Tomorrow another hunt; tomorrow another fight.




    Submitted on 2016-07-21 01:36:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201406

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry