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    dots Submission Name: Be You dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsBe You dots


    Be you


    Love life my friends
    because we have
    nothing better to do.

    Remove the
    from your life
    so you may
    be liberated
    Of burdens and
    of obligation.

    Be giving,
    be generous
    with your time,
    but most importantly
    be genuine.


    And begin your
    being with true
    intention each time.

    Rise above.

    Submitted on 2016-07-22 02:00:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You better buckle up, it's the law.
    | Posted on 2016-08-13 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very well thought out piece. It speaks volumes to the reader without over burdening them with deep philosophical thoughts. It's easy to follow, easy to read, and it gets to the point - and the point you're making is a very important one. We could all learn from this write.

    Thanks for sharing,

    | Posted on 2016-07-24 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]

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