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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    lifetime





    monuments
    That are silently









    being chiseled
    Away from the canyons.




    Submitted on 2016-07-22 02:25:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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