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    dots Submission Name: Bluedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBluedots
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    It’s just a color
    But it screams
    Absence
    In place of someone
    That one
    Leached from our being

    It’s just a mood
    But it cries
    Loneliness
    Afraid of what’s left behind
    Someone
    Ebbing from remembrance

    It’s just a song
    But it echoes
    Left behind
    In place of someone new
    Someone
    Knowing nothing’s new




    Submitted on 2016-08-06 18:11:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed the use of an abstract color used to describe the human emotions that are depicted here.

    I was left hearing the screams and cries echoing a loneliness when the realization that the more things change the more they stay the same becomes a reality.

    | Posted on 2016-09-23 00:00:00 | by colopoao | [ Reply to This ]


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