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    dots Submission Name: Diminishing Egodots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Depths of the essence of being. Releasing the me from mentality. Reprogramming the interconnected highways, communicating by way of synapses; firing frequently. Travel with me into this stillness and new way of seeing. Perception being the driving force of this reality.


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    dotsDiminishing Egodots
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    Looking up
    Looking out
    Looking towards
    The light.

    That Devine
    That brings deep
    Enlightenment.

    Looking out for
    The change
    of mind.

    Looking towards
    This light
    Each and every
    Night.

    Stepping aside
    Leaving ego behind
    Stripping down the
    Essence of being.



    True Being.



    Stillness
    calmness
    Residing




    Moments of stillness
    Create awareness that
    Is irreversible.


    Hopefully.



    Awareness of Me.
    Eliminating it
    Reprogramming it
    Intellectually
    Recognizing it

    Disenchanted by the ego.



    Moving forward
    into being
    Present.


    Simply
    Solely
    We
    Only
    Need
    This.


    Remove want
    Remove me
    Remove the I
    In every beginning

    Simply exist


    Simply be



    Continue to
    Enlighten the
    Being.






















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