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    dots Submission Name: what wakes me up at nightdots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
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    dotswhat wakes me up at nightdots
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    He is an honest man. I know this by his self-description.
    His love for me I question, but I believe that’s my reflection
    I carry the fear of abandonment, of being lonely while not alone
    I can’t shake my distrust of connection through a phone
    Surrounded by admirers, but forever on my own

    Incessantly questioning the power of attraction,
    I wonder,
    If this obsession could lessen.
    My heart aches with certainty that every thought or word I say is
    rooted from my over bearing passion.
    It folds itself up and slides right through the cracks of every mediocre feeling
    as it falls down through the ceiling, it wakes me up at night.

    I crave, I seek, I wander every day for an adventure that could
    Hold back my unravel, a cease to painful battle
    If I could just find my way by travel
    I’d like to bring this honest man.




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