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    dots Submission Name: Duality of Reality dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Everyday a life is lived within duality.


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    dotsDuality of Reality dots
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    Why pick me?
    I'm nothing you know
    Just a girl with a heart
    Who wants to see
    The decency in every
    Human being, but the life I live
    Is duality at hand when you believe
    The lies you tell your friends.

    Wave theory and particle theory
    Defined by this duality within this life.
    Lightness and darkness always reside
    It's up to the stars to charge this light.

    Sound theory a way to heal yourself
    Get lost in that tune that pumps you up.

    (Swaggernactors)


    I dunno I went to write Schwartzenegger.












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      The leading of a double life message really came through strongly for me with this poem. In this world we are all put in roles and some times we aspire to be that which we are not. This is because we may think that our lives are not exciting enough and decide to tweak the details to add a little spice.

    I liked the humor with Arnold at the end. I could hear his accent in statement.
    | Posted on 2016-09-23 00:00:00 | by colopoao | [ Reply to This ]


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