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Sonnet: Dinner of the Carnal


Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75 /194 /254
Words: 100
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Sonnet: Dinner of the Carnal



With tomorrow comes the freshest of catch,
floundering forward into the gill net,
of the savage beast that lurks in the pitch;
of the carnal man whose soul lost it’s bet.

At the end awaits the scalding black pot,
stuffed with earthly pleasures and lobster tail,
flavors that ambitious chefs have forgot;
flavors that dying men request from jail.

Dark fingers raked over mahogany,
beckoning for the next guest to enter,
hungry now---for a lost epiphany;
hungry now---for a languishing dinner.

Feast or famine sows the fields with evil,
lovely candle light meal with the Devil.




Submitted on 2016-08-22 23:32:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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