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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet: Dinner of the Carnaldots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSonnet: Dinner of the Carnaldots
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    With tomorrow comes the freshest of catch,
    floundering forward into the gill net,
    of the savage beast that lurks in the pitch;
    of the carnal man whose soul lost it’s bet.

    At the end awaits the scalding black pot,
    stuffed with earthly pleasures and lobster tail,
    flavors that ambitious chefs have forgot;
    flavors that dying men request from jail.

    Dark fingers raked over mahogany,
    beckoning for the next guest to enter,
    hungry now---for a lost epiphany;
    hungry now---for a languishing dinner.

    Feast or famine sows the fields with evil,
    lovely candle light meal with the Devil.




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