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    dots Submission Name: Lanterns of the Wispsdots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsLanterns of the Wispsdots

    We walked through the night,
    into the stale humidity of summer.
    Cool and sticky---never to be ignored,
    what stood had no form,
    such was nature,
    just a stranger in the mist?

    Naught, not a face looked from our shadows,
    eyes that leapt into the garish,
    Foolish Fire, we cried "you there!"

    "Lonely Will-o’-the-wisp,
    do your lanterns burn
    for the lost and meek?"

    Ethereal reply, we stared and denied.
    "Ne’er-do-well, you haplessly rest,
    unaware of a past,
    that aimlessly seeks to pull you beneath.
    Dregs of curiosity shine,
    as flames, as Polaris in mind,
    glimmering in our eyes,
    a ghost light demise."

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