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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsLithograph dots
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    “and there it was,
    and here we go,
    emptiness like winter snow;
    touch of earth,
    our seeds to sow,
    below the soil,
    no life will grow.”

    An epitaph worn away,
    all but these words forgotten,
    barely visible until autumn days.
    Warmth drained like time,
    locked in lithograph,
    leeching how ivy climbs,
    across scrawls of granite;
    across a besieged mind.

    “and here it was,
    and there it went,
    live your life without regret,
    touch of earth,
    where body is kept,
    below the soil,
    no death neglect.”




    Submitted on 2016-08-22 23:41:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautifully written. Sad and wise and ample proof that hindsight is a panorama (or diorama, if you prefer) in 3D.
    | Posted on 2016-09-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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