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    dots Submission Name: Catharsis 💩dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCatharsis 💩dots
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    You bid farewell so easily.
    Like the flakiness
    Of the outer layer
    of an onion.


    In the middle,
    Poison for some, full of
    Flavor for others.

    Each inner layer the same
    Deeper and deeper
    The center, no change.

    Remove each layer
    To reveal the same
    The same
    Same poisonous
    Fumes.

    My eyes how they burn
    I can no longer see
    The tears taking over
    As it flushes me.

    Peel away your layers
    It's all the same.
    To me you are an onion
    Burning my eyes.
    Licking my lips as I cry
    Tasting that salt
    Gravity wants so bad.



    You walk away
    Shaking your head.


    How can sorrow be something
    You create when love is suppose
    To stregthen.
    You tore my head off
    Only to shit
    Inside my throat
    Your turd sits.


    Terd?


    There is always something
    To be unhappy about in your
    World of you as you steamroll about.

    (This is a shitty write.
    I'm sorry to you all
    Who read to this point.)





















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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmmm...?

    This is odd. I give you credit for originality for sure. I have never thought of an onion as flaky though so I had a bit if difficulty moving on from there. Perhaps a different adjective would work better there? Just a thought. But, this was Certainly different...
    | Posted on 2016-09-10 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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