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    Author: Narna
    Elite Ratio:    1.73 - 14/102/70
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Creatures of habit;
    we love the same.
    Open hearts, and
    closed fists.
    The absence of honesty;
    a moth bitten favourite shirt.
    The memory of heartbreak;
    a mirror smashed;
    a black cat;
    an open ladder,
    casting shade.
    Feeling may be;
    the absence of thought, but
    this feels mindless.





    Submitted on 2016-08-25 05:24:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Habit and superstition. These are good observations, there is a lot here. Comparing things like faith, deception, that moth bitten shirt, refusing to let go. I don't know this piece hurts my heart a bit but also has enough honesty that I can relate.
    | Posted on 2016-08-25 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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