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    dots Submission Name: The Fiddlerdots

    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 144/114/64
    Words: 274
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Fiddlerdots

    There once was a man from Pa-Diddle
    who frolicked about with his fiddle

    He played all night, and he played all day
    much to the villagers’ chagrin and dismay

    Hop about, hop about
    Swaying all around
    Turning, turning
    A festive sound

    House to house, he plucked a tune
    kin began to sneer or swoon

    Into the streets some folks did dance
    caught in a joyous, musical trance

    “Please stop and consider such noise!”,
    an old man spoke aloud
    The fiddler coyly grinned
    and played on to the crowd

    The elder chanted and began to gloar
    “A curse on you to fiddle no more!”

    The minstrel dropped his violin
    and froze up like a mannequin

    No more hopping
    or turning about
    To silence and calm
    the tunes did reroute

    “Ah but yes, some quiet at last!”
    Proud of the spell that he had cast

    As he continued to brag and sass
    the townsfolk came to him en masse

    Stones they threw
    and he ducked and ran
    The wanted their medleys
    not a frivolous ban

    Out of the bourg and into the wood
    the grizzled, gray pater now understood

    As he had jinxed a friendly type
    so now was he the hamlet snipe

    As the evil charm did lift
    the artist, he did stir
    His bowing soon began
    as they surely did prefer

    The innocent rarely ask for a fight
    Stand up for them when they are in plight

    Give them their dues for all that should try
    Send them away with a watchful eye

    2016 Kelly R. Sullivan

    Submitted on 2016-08-28 11:18:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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