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    dots Submission Name: The Truthdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsThe Truthdots
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    Love in the dark,
    Cry because the light.

    Smile at all the sadness,
    Cower in fear to all happiness.

    Hang on to the anger,
    Leave behind the peace.

    Care for what you hate,
    Forget about what you can't live without.

    Keep close what will last,
    Get rid of what always fades.

    Believe the truth,
    Don't listen to the lies.

    Know what will last,
    Know what will die.




    Submitted on 2016-08-30 00:12:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Rewinds did me of my boyfriend.
    Continue to express
    yourself.
    Pika
    | Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Pikachuchu | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write, "Love in the dark Cry because the light", I love that. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2016-12-21 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]
      Love does that and more.
    | Posted on 2016-09-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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