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    dots Submission Name: The Saga of Indecision dots
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    Author: poeticscribe13
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Romance
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    Description:
       Basically my guy situation...... :S


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    dotsThe Saga of Indecision dots
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    The deafening silence
    the screaming white noise
    tells the saga of indecision

    I, stand as the rock
    waiting for your inertia
    to kick the stars into motion

    We, could be the supernova
    of nebulous intoxications
    of a blackhole of desperate connotations
    exhuming deadly flames
    in circular motion

    The dazzling of your eye
    my quick wit razor tongue
    build momentum as we edge closer
    inch by inch, stitched in contradiction
    pillared by coincidence which by
    its very nature is inevitably true

    I, am swayed by the peace you bring
    to the impulsivity of my carefree soul
    recklessly free, fearfully of stability
    my gypsy heart willing to
    abandon my wandering spirit
    to the billows of your anchor

    Life has a funny way of creating life
    through atomic collisions
    the feelings are inescapable
    paramountly afflicting
    as I, stand in my corner
    magnetized by your trajectory

    If I could I would retire these emotions
    I would hang up all the times
    where we affectionately skirted
    over the pebbles of the
    obvious mutual intentions

    However, I'm at the point of
    brewing temperature
    where my eyes long
    to land like a dove
    on your shoulder
    still discerning if the risk
    of established friendship
    is worth the fall.




    Submitted on 2016-09-03 19:50:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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