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    dots Submission Name: Indigo Prophecydots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIndigo Prophecydots
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    Life has been all about getting greeted
    at the front door then herded out the back
    getting loved for awhile until hearts depleted
    while hourglass sand sits in a vial on a lab rack
    timestamped and filed away until later needed
    anniversaries nulled forgotten like a knick knack
    all that meaning can't stay deleted, I need it, I feel cheated
    boxed up seated in the attic or gnawed on by a rat pack
    sold me out on the honest bit where I pleaded
    passed person to person like some freaked black
    mild in body and tone and seated where lips meet
    lovely and lost on the trail for a ranger to track
    some kind of dark game that I can't seem to beat
    cherry started a wildfire and left behind angry ashes
    the forest cries mother; You're batting your lashes




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