Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Indigo Prophecydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 517
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 864



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsIndigo Prophecydots
    -------------------------------------------


    Life has been all about getting greeted
    at the front door then herded out the back
    getting loved for awhile until hearts depleted
    while hourglass sand sits in a vial on a lab rack
    timestamped and filed away until later needed
    anniversaries nulled forgotten like a knick knack
    all that meaning can't stay deleted, I need it, I feel cheated
    boxed up seated in the attic or gnawed on by a rat pack
    sold me out on the honest bit where I pleaded
    passed person to person like some freaked black
    mild in body and tone and seated where lips meet
    lovely and lost on the trail for a ranger to track
    some kind of dark game that I can't seem to beat
    cherry started a wildfire and left behind angry ashes
    the forest cries mother; You're batting your lashes




    Submitted on 2016-09-04 06:55:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201461

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry