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    dots Submission Name: Soaring Dreamsdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 262/107/52
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Soaring Dreams

    Dreaming big dreams.
    Working hard for the dreams.
    Never giving up the dreams.

    My dreams to touch other lives.
    My dreams to touch other hearts.
    My dreams to make others smile.
    My dreams to help others in need.
    My dreams to spread happiness around.

    My dreams to make seminal contributions.
    My dreams to contribute to pivotal findings.
    My dreams to leave something behind.

    My dreams charm my life.
    My dreams sustain my life.
    My dreams are my life.




    Submitted on 2016-09-10 00:29:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      dreams are the emergent energy of lives
    tethered to an outward perspective
    well lived, well loved, well done
    they are the soul of the hope in us...

    Just my thoughts on the dreams that have become your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2016-10-03 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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