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    dots Submission Name: Hell is a place on earth with medots
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    Author: dancer-of-words
    ASL Info:    21/trans/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 167/158/74
    Words: 339
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 515
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    Description:
       I adapted Lana Del Rey's lyrics of her song "Video Games" to be...well...suicidal.


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    dotsHell is a place on earth with medots
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    Staring out the window
    Finger on the trigger
    Take away the pain

    Psychiatrists, psychologists
    Medication, therapy
    I'm going insane

    I told myself that I could do it
    but I couldn't so just screw it
    I could never win

    All the happy times for me
    gone beyond my memory
    like they'd never been.

    It's me, it's me,
    It was always me
    I could never be happy
    I tell myself all the time
    Hell is a place on earth with me
    Let me tell you all the things I wanted to be
    I just wanted to find heaven's healing, yes it's true
    They say that the world was built for two
    Only worth living if somebody is loving you
    I guess that's why I couldn't see it through.

    Lying on my bed now
    Always more tears to cry, somehow
    Make it go away

    Lying the blue dark
    in a silence cold, stark
    waiting for the day

    Imagining my own death
    fighting for my last breath
    It's no use to pray

    While all of my friends fall
    disappear to old calls
    Guess I lost them on the way

    It's me, it's me
    It was always me
    I could never be happy
    I tell myself all the time

    Hell is a place on earth with me
    Let me tell you all the things I wanted to be
    I just wanted to find heaven's healing, yes it's true
    They say that the world was built for two
    only worth living if somebody is loving you
    I guess that's why I couldn't see it through.

    Death takes me in it's old arms
    with all of it's cold charms
    Take me far away

    Somewhere where there's sunshine
    Where I always feel fine
    Everything's ok

    Where I can pretend to know
    Heaven's a place you can go
    Please show me the way

    Somewhere quiet, unfound
    underneath a green mound
    where I don't have to play

    any video games.





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