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    dots Submission Name: Mid Section dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 122
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    dotsMid Section dots

    There is
    a lot
    to say
    About the givers
    in this life.

    Joy beaming
    from ear to ear
    Chest chasing
    out the fears.

    Faith providing
    strength to persist
    Within this life's

    Begin with
    pure intention.
    Remove the

    it's all a
    Of what lies
    Within your
    Mid section.

    Submitted on 2016-09-22 00:15:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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