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    dots Submission Name: Mid Section dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMid Section dots
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    There is
    a lot
    to say
    About the givers
    in this life.




    Joy beaming
    from ear to ear
    Chest chasing
    out the fears.

    Faith providing
    strength to persist
    Within this life's
    Abyss.


    Begin with
    pure intention.
    Remove the
    misconceptions.

    Remember
    it's all a
    Perception
    Of what lies
    Within your
    Mid section.









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