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    dots Submission Name: shukhidots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Misc/Death
    Total Views: 283
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 111



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       i miss her so much


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    dotsshukhidots
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    heaven and the stars
    never seemed so far away,
    no

    not until you
    passed away




    Submitted on 2016-09-27 06:30:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Loss needs no words. Not really. I think that the spaces between the words probably convey just as much meaning as the scribbles themselves.
    | Posted on 2016-10-02 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Profound in its unadorned simplicity. That which was already far far away is now nigh unattainable.

    There is obviously a lot here that goes unstated because essentially, there are no words. Should you decide to try and find them anyway, I'd like to see what you come up with.
    | Posted on 2016-09-27 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]


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