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    dots Submission Name: Stellardots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 463
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsStellardots
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    In our chemistry she was the catalyst
    always edging eager and earnest with faith
    in each other and desire, gleaming with life
    of bolstered pride and bare happiness
    together we were serenity flaunted
    never questioned serendipity
    but lady luck has ever taunted
    me towards tragedy
    but i've always sought
    a loving partner for this world
    and agaonize under constant doubts
    doomed to modern purgatory
    mired and entrenched, mistakenly
    bristled instead of balanced
    laid low with my talents
    and
    I had thought these words forsaken me
    needed new experience to reawaken me
    and
    I will rise
    phoenix from these idle ashes
    with every hue immolation offers
    each feather a downy flare
    a benefit in this darkness
    each flicker holds a heart
    fickle love, all flash and foil
    abandoned to the stresses
    left to a cold death
    and
    I know that
    the closer to the end we got
    the more I came up lacking
    I was already in my head
    suffering, watching my soul pack
    because she locked us out of her chest
    distressing my depression affecting
    all and with a great bitterness
    a solemn sense of great loss
    birthed with the languish
    of my everlasting isolation
    bereft of my only other
    my sweetest second
    my companion
    the cuddle champion
    nuzzle into my chest
    while we lay in tandem
    bonded and begging constant
    company is cherished
    no more instead we bite off time apart
    and spit them out soured
    make like we with hunger devoured
    when in truth she choked
    on commitment and got distant
    saw my sanity slipping and jumped ship
    real quick like she'd catch sickness
    we were always getting too heated
    money was tight and we needed
    more than our names were worth
    but that's just youth, say some
    one day we'll be truly valued
    by a madman in a comfy chair
    up there with the tinted glass
    window seat spyglass and an ass-print
    and that's supposed to sate me
    supposed to sedate this rage
    at losing precious moments
    but I must atone, so lets
    quicken this,
    line the trials up
    and weigh the toll
    and rake the coals to fire
    sit back, admire the simple feat
    bare hands and a bundle of wood
    some kindling to kindly
    commit to conjured flame
    casting dangerous heat in
    rage untamed ravage matter
    until carbon spent
    resides pitted to where
    with more wood and a bellows
    could coax combustion
    aspiring only to run its course
    before collapsing
    surpassing desire
    she is supple radiance
    sunrise and high noon
    cosmic like a solar burst
    at night light directed
    earthbound
    shadows the dark side
    but returns reflected
    by lovely Luna
    i'm under this atmosphere
    praising the stars
    this universe amassed
    expanding rapidly towards nothingness
    a test of whether or not
    it simply is




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