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    dots Submission Name: Colorful Humming Skulldots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 767
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    dotsColorful Humming Skulldots
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    Aural tempest thrashing its ambience
    behind a steady beat
    always building
    echos onto echos
    an ethereal atmosphere
    with a corporeal sea
    swaying with each link
    in this resonant chain
    as the music turns
    over on itself
    lasers beam past vision
    into the peripheral
    while colors flash out
    painting writhings passionate
    and bass vibrates low
    thrumming on the skull
    tickling grey matter
    into orchestra
    instruments like
    synapses sparking out
    together
    explosion and melody
    calling us higher




    Submitted on 2016-10-02 14:46:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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